I want to trust the science

Recently, I’ve been playing around with some of the more structurally fixed poetical forms. I particularly like the ones that have a lot of repetition and one of those is the Villanelle, which apparently has its origins in medieval Italian folk singing. The heavy repetition in the form makes sense since group singing requires lyrics that everybody can remember so they can join in easily.

Anyway, here’s a corona-inspired poem in the Villanelle form called “I want to trust the science”.

I want to trust the science
I want to feel okay
There shall be no defiance

There’s comfort in reliance
The mind it slips away
I want to trust the science

Give us your alliance
Don't be led astray
There shall be no defiance

We must demand compliance
Obedience! I say 
I want to trust the science

They will accept the guidance
Or they’ll be made to pay
I want to trust the science
There shall be no defiance

4 thoughts on “I want to trust the science”

  1. A NINETEEN-line poem with two rhymes throughout, consisting of FIVE tercets and a quatrain, with the first and third lines of the opening tercet recurring alternately at the end of the other tercets and with both repeated at the close of the concluding quatrain.

  2. Jose – correct. A very restrictive form but that’s all part of the fun.

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